Doesn’t bother me, I just thought it odd as I wouldn’t normally miss stuff like that. I’d be interested to hear the first two books again to see if that was clearer but I just didn’t realise, or if the author left it vague on purpose. Just as a side note, the first two books seemed like they were paranormal mpreg type stories set in a fantasy land, whereas this one was much clearer that it’s a world where people decide their labels regardless of their body parts, and there’s nothing paranormal about it. It’s been a while since I heard the first two stories in this series, but I’m sure they were written better. Also, the main characters didn’t spend much time together then were separated for loads of the story, and I just didn’t buy into their relationship at the end. Unfortunately, his father brings him too much troubleand too many debts to payfor that to ever be possible. If it was trimmed down to a quarter of the size it could have been a good story. All Rath wants is a quiet, peaceful life. Language: English Words: 802 Chapters: 1/1 Comments: 6 Kudos: 6 Hits: 39 Filters Filter results: Submit Sort by. Details about the house that didn’t lead to anything, what periphery characters did during scenes that didn’t add to the story at all, and so many boring pointless scenes that didn’t add anything at all either. Based on the book 'Tournament of Losers' by author Megan Derr. There were so many excess details that should have been cut to stop the book from dragging. I really struggled to get through this book.
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